The Happy Cadaver

[girlie]

Alright, so I am going through a hard time right now with school among other things. This piece will probably be a bit crude in style and flow, seeing as I haven't written anything thoroughly emotional in over two years.

What is the matter with you
You cantankerous man!
Are you really that pathetic?
Are you really that insecure?

Does the auspicious future
Of a teenager,
A teenage girl
Sincerely threaten you?

Regardless of what was said
Regardless of overstepped bounds
Does that benign intent hurt you so?
Does it kill you

Or was it simply a trap?
Were your intention captious?
Was your friendship foe?
Merely a setup?

So tell me
You tricky bastard
After your calumnies
After my misery

Do you feel better now?
Do you feel superior
You ruined my last shot
My chance to enjoy this hellish prison

No you don't
You'll never be happy
You are assinine
Immature

I know when you'll be happy
When I leave
When the threat is gone
Congrats

Now there is a the cadaver
My cadaver
Sprawled across the spray booth
Choked with candy apple red

Slouched over the horse
Singed by the fire
Choked with shielding gas
Burned with welding wire

Are you happy now?
You cantankerous old man?
Are you happy?
The threat is eliminated

No more bright future
No more competition

Just life
Your miserable life
Your lonely life

[Rook]

Wow, that is really awesome, I saw a minor error you might want to fix where you said both "a" and "the" one after the other, but other than that...Wow.

Just wow.