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Post by thade on Sept 10, 2008 8:31:25 GMT -5
--- Player Information Handle: Thade Gender: Male Contact Information PM Other Characters here? No --- Character Information Canon? No Character Name: Thadius Krom Gender: Male Age: 40 Species/Breed: Chimp Current Occupation: Mid Angel Personality: Thade is very intelligent, almost too smart to be in the position that he is, which is half the reason why he's never been considered for promotion in decades. He can see the democracy dying while corrupt beaucrats whisper to the governing council. He is serious, soldier through and through. He can turn off his emotions in order to think and act practically, without influence from how he feels, but rather what's most logical. Appearance: 5'6" 176# Dark brown hair, black eyes, greying beard, strong brow. Background: Thade hails from a long dynasty of soldiers. Both sides of his family are laden with military commanders and generals. Members of the Krom & Joale families are well thought of and deserve respect. As is with every Krom, the cost of commitment to the Guild was his first-born son. Password? "Highway to the danger zone! Ride into the danger zone!" ---
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Post by Rook on Sept 10, 2008 19:52:14 GMT -5
(Ah, Planet of the Apes as a faceclaim, never would have thought of it actually. xD)
Hm this needs quite a bit of work, it's a good start though. For one "Power" is not a position in itself, it's the term used to describe different branches of Middle Angels.
If Thadius is a 'soldier' he'd have a Power in Combat.
Angels like this can be considered alike to soldiers but their not usually called that, this is a mixture of law enforcement AND military. Nevertheless you can use the term, just get the idea of uniforms out of your head. xD There aren't really and 'Commanders' and 'Generals' either, there's the Seraphim, Middle Angels, Fledglings and Apprentices.
Also you need to actually write up a physical description, you can still link to the picture but it can't substitute a physical description. Your personality and history are okay but I suggest expanding a bit more on those too, like how he relates to other people, habits, likes and dislikes ect. They are both a little short.
Dosen't have to be a novel, just more fleshed out.
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