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Post by ocean on Sept 5, 2008 15:42:35 GMT -5
i'm firae (hi firae) and i'm obsessed with poetry.
it's kind of my "thing". writing's the general thing i love to do, but poetry is my specific. i'm published ;D
comments on meh latest?
Shallow
eyes, wide eyes, limpid doe’s eyes at the barrel, victimized but no one
Minds
the insincerity, the confusion, for in the end it’s all over, that much they
Know
and so they do not pity, they offer no batting of long lashes,
Nothing
at all, because no one lasts forever.
copyright to firae, any traces of plagerism will be taken to the legal court of justice. that means you get sued if you claim this as your own, and i am NOT kidding. so, comments?
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Raron
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Post by Raron on Sept 5, 2008 18:06:18 GMT -5
whoa... cool stuff!
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